We are learning to write acrostic poem about Spring. We used the first letter of the word SPRING to start the sentence, we looked outside to see what we could put into our poem.
It was easy to come up with the sentence because we see the daffodils on our daily run, the lambs are in the paddock and spring is all around us.
It was difficult to spell the different words like-daffodil and impatient but my mum helped me.
Next time I will try and make it rhyme more and include more simile, metaphors and punctuation.
Ka rawe Sloan, I really enjoyed reading your acrostic poem. Yes you're right Spring is all around us. I liked the way you asked your mum for help with your spelling. You have used rich descriptive words when describing spring. Next time you could use a different font to help make you words stand out more. Keep up the fantastic mahi.
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